Thursday, January 13, 2011

My question to the Lord

Oh Lord! Forgive me,
but a question in my mind,
Is there a lot of work?
You really don't have time?

Please listen to me,
I swear it wont take long.
Surely it will take less time then a worship song.

How do you categorise blessings?
Or choose people for playing cards?
and why do all the "Lord of Rings",
have your personal bodyguards?
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6 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 13, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    really thoughtful..lukin forward to some more creations lyk dis...liked it!!!

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  2. HarshitaJanuary 13, 2011 at 11:11 AM

    thanks a lot hiya :-)

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  3. मनोज जोशीJanuary 14, 2011 at 2:25 AM

    Dear Bhatiji......
    really a nice poem.....
    God bless U...I luv ur style of writing..simple and thoughtful......

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  4. Aadhaar HelpJanuary 14, 2011 at 3:49 AM

    Nice poem :)

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  5. ASHVINIJanuary 15, 2011 at 2:05 AM

    Nice. Keep it up. But check final draft of Hindi, because there seems to be some problem in software of conversion from Roman to Hindi. God bless. Popsey n Mom.

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  6. AViatorJanuary 15, 2011 at 5:37 AM

    Great work.........awesome....!!!!

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